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[Atalya]

@Shadow Lucario ~ Jinchuuriki have to be related to the village's Kage in one way or another.

& @Pikalove10 ~ I forgot to mention, Jinchuuriki have to have some relation to a past or current Kage.


Yeah, sorry I forgot to mention that. And since there isn't a Kage he can be related to, you'll have to take it away, send 'em to a different village... Or he/they can be the Great Grand Children of the Second Hokage. Since Tsunade had no children, and Kushina and Jiraiya haven't been made yet. They could also possibly be made relatives of any of the Hokages.

You'll have to make those modifications, take away the Bijuu or change the characters and their villages to better suite them so they become relatives of a different Kage and therefore allowing you to have your Jinchuuriki. You would also have to change their history a bit, and their Jutsu to better fit that they are Jinchuuriki. I'm sorry for having you guys change your characters.

This post has been edited by Iceshadow: Aug 16 2010, 04:40 PM

[Pikalover10]

ok..... could I, since nobody really knows the 2nd hokage's past, make it to where the second hokage married an uchiha? and then so on and so forth and he's still an uchiha? If not, then that's fine and I'll edit it

@Black Fire: Ok, cool! Let's PM each other the details ok? so we don't flood the thread XD

[Zuke]

I didn't want to change the history, so I made him not have one.

Name: Hiro Narusato
Age: 22
Gender: Male
Sexual Orientation: Bisexual

Rank:Akatsuki
Why Did they become a member?: Hiro had killed many people in his village except for the children. He went on to the other villages and killed off many people. He had only one place to go to so he joined the Akatsuki.
Village: Naruyamha (Cave)

History: When he was born, there wasn't a person in sight, except a couple of children, his mother, and a nurse. He was hated as a child by everyone around him. The children never bothered him. He would sit alone in solitude. He lived in a town with civilization booming all around it. He would escape from his house from time to time to act like a ninja. He was training until one day, when a man in a black cloak came up to him and started talking to him. He soon found out this man would teach him.

Hiro paid attention to the man. He showed how he could use energy called chakra to overpower people. He showed Hiro with ease. Hiro got up and tried to do what the man did, but did something different. He lit a tree on fire! The man smirked and said that Hiro did good on his first try. Hiro and the man trained for 5 years, until Hiro was 13. Hiro and the man sparred and Hiro learned his power well and beat the man. The man stood up and clapped. Hiro smirked and the man said a few words, "You will be like me."

Hiro visited the man in a house they built on their training grounds. Hiro and the man grew a fond friendship. Hiro and the man would talk about the man and how he searched for certain people. The man never took off his cloak. One day when Hiro went to visit, he saw the mans house burnt down to the ground. He went inside to find the man laying on the ground. Hiro ran up to him and picked him up. the man told Hiro, "You will go to the place marked on this map, *cough* after you d-destroy your village. You will be w-welcomed. You will go and survive the w-way I did." The man died in Hiro's arms, but it was a clone and poofed into a log.

Hiro found a sword at his village's General Store and took it. He trained everyday with it around the man's house. After a week, he started his destruction. he used his jutsus to destroy the village and all civilization around it. He made sure not to kill the children, for he wanted a challenge in life. He soon left the ruins and walked to the place on the map. He went in a cave and joined a place called the Akatsuki. he leader said, "You must be the person he was talking about. Kisame would be proud."

After a little bit of missions, he was asked to go scout around the Village Hidden in the Mist. Once he was almost complete, there was a women who had tried to stop him. She tried to charge at him, but got sliced in half by Hiro's sword. She died instantly and had a picture of a man who smiled and a little boy who looked sweaty, but chubby. She was at the right putting her hand on the child's head.

Appearance: His hair color is blue and his skin color is a orange pink color. He wears a black shirt under his Akatsuki cloak. He wears a headband that has a triangle with a slash in the middle. His pupil have a purpleish green to it. He wears sandals that he was given by Kisame. He has his Ring on his left ring finger. It's color is yellow and it means Akuryou (Demon).
Piercings: Has spider bites with a nose piercing.

Personality: He acts like the perfect emo. He only loves to kill and burn things. He hates whenever he fails or someone escapes. He likes it when he tears a family apart. He doen't like it when he doesn't get the first hit.

Jutsu Varieties: Hiro uses the Fire type jutsus regularly. He has never tried to use a different type of jutsu, but has created quite a few. He usually uses his own jutsus.

List of Jutsu:

Fire Style: Honooboru
The user charges up a ball of flame that looks like Rasengan or Chidori, but is Fire. The user can either charge towards the enemy and attack head on, or they can throw it towards the enemy.

Fire Style: Hikamdo
If used correctly, The user puts down a Tag that when stepped on, put the person who stepped on it inside a fire dome which burns them alive. It takes a lot of chakra, but can kill fast.

Fire Style: Hidrak
This is a summoning jutsu which summons Hidrak. The user cuts their elbow to where blood drops on the ground and the user does the jutsu to summon Hidrak. Hidrak is a dragon that has little flight time, for he likes to use his claws to fight.

Fire Style: Honoodrak
The user sends a fire blast which is in the shape of a dragon head. This move can be stopped, only by using a ice or water jutsu.

Fire Clone Jutsu
It is almost exactly like Shadow Clone Jutsu, but instead when damaged, or unneeded, they will turn into a small flame that disappears.

Fire Style: Fire Augment
The user does a hand sign, and blows an almost inextinguishable fire on a weapon to use. The only way to put it out, is with fire or to sheath the weapon.

This post has been edited by Zuke: Oct 10 2010, 05:14 PM

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@ Pika - I don't think there's really any need to discuss much to be honest, I'll just edit Kurai's profile so that it shows he was assigned to a squad, which later turned out to obtain a member of the Uchiha clan aswell as a member of the Akimichi clan. Besides, if it turns out anything does need discussing, then we'd need to keep Shadow Lucario in the discussion too, something you can't really do with PMs.

Just to warn you by the way, if we have enough time to get in a training session in this RP rather than a mission, I WILL throw in the bells test.

Also, I just feel I should mention that I threw in the fact that Kurai is currently studying how to use Fire Jutsu, though he only knows te Fireball Jutsu, as in the one the Uchiha's developed pretty much single handedly.

This post has been edited by Black Fire: Aug 17 2010, 08:39 AM

[Atalya]

ok..... could I, since nobody really knows the 2nd hokage's past, make it to where the second hokage married an uchiha? and then so on and so forth and he's still an uchiha? If not, then that's fine and I'll edit it

No, technically he couldn't. Being as he was the First Hokage's brother, and the First was a member of the Senju Clan, and the Senju Clan and the Uchiha Clan were bitter rivals, no, he could not have done that. You'll have to do something else. But don't worry. He can be related to a Hokage without being related directly. Like say, he could have been a relative of Asuma Sarutobi, like the son of a sister or his. Therefore, he would be related to the Third Hokage. Tuh-dah. Easy fix.

[Zuke]

@ Black - Well it would be nice if I could be in your squad. It wouldn't make me make two more characters and wait for someone to make another to be in the squad.

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@ Black - Well it would be nice if I could be in your squad. It wouldn't make me make two more characters and wait for someone to make another to be in the squad.

Well it's a good job your character is in Kurai's then isn't it?

Anywho, the squad needs one more member, aswell as a number, but I would greatly apperciate it if whoever makes the final Genin makes her female, no need for an ultra-super-macho squad...

This post has been edited by Black Fire: Aug 17 2010, 11:02 AM

[Zuke]

Eh, I might make it. I would rather not to, but if no one does it in two days then i'll make an SU for her.

[Pikalover10]

@Shadow: That works! XD He can still be an uchiha? 'Cuz if not I'll make it to where he isn't a jinchuriki host

@Black: Ok

[Atalya]

@Pika ~ Yes, I guess he could still be one. He being the son of Asuma's sister's daughter. Therefore, he can still be an Uchiha, and be related to a Hokage, thus allowing him to become a Jinchuuriki. But remember, since he's only a Genin, he doesn't have much control over the Bijuu. Therefore, he can't call upon its Chakra on his own free will.

[Zuke]

@ Ice - Not trying to rush you, but you never said if Hiro Narusato was accepted into this RP. I'm not trying to sound mean or anything, but if you're still deciding take your time.

[Atalya]

Oh! Yeah, I did accept him. He's on the second post 'n' junk ;D

BTW EVERYONE! I made the RP thread ^^

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I notice the RP thread a while ago, but I can't really make a post with Kurai until all the members of his squad are decided...

You know what, I think I'll just make the third Genin in his squad, but I won't be able to make her profile today because I'm going out in like five minutes. Oh, I probably won't be on tomorrow too much either. It's exam results day you see, so I could be in a rather foul mood...

[Atalya]

Ooooh, I'm sorry Blackie ^^
I'll attempt to not get on your bad side if you do end up in a bad mood

[Delete This User...]

Meh, turns out I'm not in a foul mood at all, I got the grades I needed for a Uni place and the room that I'm staying in got upgraded. As far as I am concerned, I would call that a win

Right, I'll start working on that profile now, but since it's nearly ten o'clock my time (as of this post anyway...) it'll probably be up some point tomorrow rather than any time soon.

[Atalya]

Oh, well that's a relief.
Now, let's just begin the RP. I would oh-so enjoy it to begin. Or do you need to complete the last member of Kurai's squad?

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I would like to complete the profile of the last member before I start RPing, but if you guys wanna start go ahead. Oh, and this profile may not be quite as detailed as Kurai's by the way, I'm kind of busy attempting to sort out accomodation for University and such, which is beginning to drive me a little insane...

Forget that, I've finished Serena's profile, I can't help but feel like something's wrong with it though. If she's accepted I'll be ready to start posting ^-^

Name: Serena Osaka

Age: 13

Gender: Female

Sexual Orientation: Straight

Rank: Genin

Village: Konohagakure (Leaf)

History: Serena was born into a family who isn’t particularly well know for producing high quality Shinobi, in fact, she is only the third in her families recorded history. Given these facts, one might begin wondering why Serena was even inducted into the Konohagakure Ninja Academy in the first place, after all, it’s not like she was expected to be a Shinobi. The answer to this question is rather simple, albeit rather odd.

One day, when checking upon the six year old child they had left to play in the back garden, Serena’s parents were rather shocked to find their daughter simply standing on the trunk of a tree, their daughter’s body parallel to the ground as she laughed at her current position for a good two or three seconds before plummeting back down to Earth and landing on her behind. Recognising this as a technique used by Shinobi, Serena’s father approached a Jounin-Level Shinobi who happened to live nearby and questioned what sort of action he should take with his daughter, leading him to be informed that she would probably be a rather successful student at the Academy.

Before long, Serena began to back up the Jounin’s words with solid evidence, by showing that as well as being much more adept than the majority of students in her class at Chakra control, at least on par with them, she was also a very quick study, literally getting full marks on pretty much every test she was given. However, once Justu were introduced into the works, everything started to take a turn for the worse for the poor girl.

While Serena may have been able to control Chakra itself almost perfectly, for some strange reason she seemed pretty much incapable of performing even the most basic of Ninjutsu and Genjustu. While some students may have simply made rather small flames of their fire-type Justu, or made clones which looked like they had been hit in the face by a spade, Serena was simply incapable of these Jutsu.

Needless to say, learning this did take it’s toll on the girl, leading her to not turn up at the academy for a couple of days. However, she did eventually return, and discovered something she was indeed rather good at, a type of Justu that had seemingly completely slipped her mind. Taijutsu.

In her class, there was literally nobody who could beat Serena in Taijutsu, well, there was nobody that she fought who could at least. As well as being rather flexible, the young girl was also rather nimble, leading her to be able to learn all E-Level Konohagakure Taijutsu well before she graduated from the academy, as well as a couple of D-Level ones, which is particularly rare in itself.

Serena has been a Genin for a little over a year now, being in her current Squad for an equal amount of time. When she discovered that her squad mates were members of two well known Clans from the Leaf Village, the Akimichi and Uchiha Clans, Serena seemed to somewhat instantly develop a massive urge to better herself. Since she behaves in rather predictable manners, it is probably safe to assume that this behaviour stemmed from the fact that Serena didn’t want to be considered inferior to the fellow Genin on her team.

She very often trains with her squad leader, Kurai Nara, one on one to develop her Taijutsu skills while the other two hone their Jutsu, but obviously she can’t keep him from helping the other two ninja, since there will be Justu even Akimichi and Uchiha Clan members will need at least a little help with. When this time arrives, Serena very often simply settles for practicing with her Chakra control, very often in the form of walking up trees, then proceeding to leap to another trunk and walk down that and so on and so forth.

Appearance: Serena

Since she is only a thirteen year old girl, her general appearance is far from impressive, including the fact that some areas are not fully ‘developed’. However, despite the fact that she may only be about 5’3’’, which is about average for a thirteen year old girl, and weigh so little that her sensei is capable of picking her up with one hand, she is one of the more beautiful girls of her generation, hence the attention she used to get from the boys in her Academy year group.

Serena’s face has rather smooth skin, and unlike the rest of her body, it’s shape is reasonably developed. Her eyes are of an emerald green colour, and her extremely long, naturally straight hair is jet black. While Serena’s hairstyle may be just a little bit strange, even for a Shinobi, it accompanies her general appearance rather nicely. The back of her hair is exceptionally long, and she ties it back in an exceptionally long ponytail, reaching right down to the bottom of her back, the position of which is remarkably similar to her squad leader’s. Rather than use a simple bobble to tie her hair back though, Serena opts to use a length of white bandage instead, since the bandage supports the weight of her exceptionally long hair much better. Serena’s bangs partially cover the Leaf Village headband (that she does indeed wear over her forehead, the two ends of its tie hanging off the back of head just underneath her ponytail), while leaving her eyes completely unobscured. The sides of her hair reach down to about the bottom of the girl’s neck, lightly curving inwards towards each other.

As far as clothing goes Serena wears a combination of both rather standard appearing ninja gear, as well as some relatively fashionable clothes. On her body she wears clothing which rather greatly resembles the appearance of a traditional kimono, though rather than being decorated with some kind of fancy pattern, the piece of clothing is of a plain, deep navy blue colour with pearl white rims, the main body of which is held together by a plain white piece of material that acts as a belt, wrapping around Serena’s body twice and being secured by a thin piece of rope. The ends of the sleeves of this kimono are held tightly to the girl’s arms by a rather long wrap of white bandage which reach about two thirds of the way down her arms, as well as running over the entire of her hands and stopping just before the joints of her fingers.

In a rather stark contrast to her upper-body wear, Serena’s legs are ordained by a jet black, skin tight pair of shorts which reach about midway down her thighs, along with a pair of fishnet leggings which run down to her jet black footwear, pretty much the entirety of the rest of her legs covered by a pair of fishnet leggings, which leave a little bit of a gap between themselves and her shorts, with yet more bandages holding them to her legs just above her shoes. On her right leg Serena wears a sheath for her Kunai, which she soon hopes to replace with a Tanto, attached via a simple brown leather strap around her leg which closely resembles a belt.

Piercings: None to speak of.

Personality: All in all, Serena is a pretty nice girl, willing to start a conversation with pretty much anyway and never really the one to decide that a conversation should end. She does posses a rather large amount of loyalty towards her companions, though if a dangerous situation should arise, her own fear towards the situation may overweigh this loyalty and cause the young girl to simply freeze for a while. While it may not be particularly common for this to happen, it isn’t really rare either, which makes her reactions hard to predict, leading her squad leader to often spend quite a bit longer formulating battle strategies than he normally would, so that he can compensate for any possible outcomes from Serena’s actions.

When it comes down to training however, Serena seems to have what could accurately described as an iron will. Whenever she is given a technique to learn she will learn it, no matter how hard it is or how hard it takes, probably due to the fact that she won’t accept being unable to do anything else, given the limits she has to go by already. However, Serena it is worth noting that Serena is most definitely not the one to teach herself techniques. The reason for this is that she simply lacks the confidence to, as she fears that she will make a complete hash of teaching herself and be unable to do the technique, even if she has a rough idea of how to perform it anyway. This fear of failure is probably derived from her need to not be seen as inferior to her fellow Genin, and is probably the girl’s only major negative personality quirk.

Despite the impression that Serena’s appearance may well give, she isn’t really too fussed about developing any relationships with the opposite sex, well, she isn’t particularly looking to begin any anyway. However, should a boy approach her who she finds that she likes herself, she wouldn’t really be the kind to say no either. The only real reason that Serena dresses the way she does is that she simply likes the clothes themselves, rather than feeling some kind of need to show herself off, unlike certain other girls.

Jutsu Varieties: To put it simple, Serena is simply incapable of performing any Jutsu whatsoever, which is rather strange considering the fact that she has pretty much perfect control over her Chakra, even at this young age. She is more than capable of using her Chakra to aid in, say, walking directly up a tree, and probably won’t struggle to much in learning how to walk on water, but as far as the likes of Fire-Jutsu, Water-Jutsu and Genjutsu are concerned, they are physically impossible for Serena to perform.

To make up for this rather major fault however, Serena’s Taijutsu abilities are top class for a Genin, and could quite easily be considered as Chunin-Level. She is more than capable of learning C-Rank techniques, if not B-Rank, thanks to her flexibility and agility, but she also posses a rather large amount of physical strength, something you really wouldn’t expect from a girl of her build and weight, which often helps to catch opponents off-guard.

This post has been edited by Black Fire: Aug 21 2010, 09:07 AM

[Atalya]

She is happily accepted, and added into the database <3

I like her muchly, though I haven't read her fully. I'll finish reading her tomorrow. School's in two days (this Monday) so I won't be active Mon. - Fri., 7:30 a.m. - 3:20 p.m. Central Time, so don't expect me to be on then.

[Pikalover10]

Awesomeness!

[Darkrow]

Debating whether to join this or not. Oh, the decisions...

Aw fuck it, I'm in. I'll take four spots.

Since you people probably know that I tend to be forgetful, a friendly punt may be required. Heh.

This post has been edited by Darkrow: Aug 20 2010, 08:50 PM