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Aderyn Kanti, The Bird Sings
Vio
post Jun 3 2009, 06:50 AM
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Name: Aderyn Kanti
Age: 18
Hometown: Used to live in Lenoila, but now lives in Gigarte.

Appearance: Aderyn has mahogany hair that is around chin length and slightly spiky. Her eyes are a lovely, silver-green color with a thin, pale blue color ringing her pupils. Her skin is creamy-white, which helps to hide the pale, feather-like scar on the left side of her neck. During the summer, however, her Cherokee heritage shines through by making her skin tan very easily. Aderyn stands at about 5" 5' and weighs averagely.

She usually wears a plain, sleeveless, black tank top and blue jean shorts that are finger-tip length. Her shoes are basic, black-and-white sneakers that most kids wear. Around her wrists are spiked wristbands. Aderyn also wears a spiked collar and a silver-chain necklace with a black opal bird dangling from the chain.

Personality: Aderyn can sometimes get side-tracked when something catches her interest. She can be impulsive, but never crude. Aderyn also has a tendancy to switch gears on people, be it by her mood swings or by randomly changing the subject. When she gets impatient, she usually gets incredibly testy and then bounces back into kinda happy, but not so happy that she's all smiles and sunshine and laughter.

She hates being the center of attention. If the spotlight is on her, she'll try really hard to redirect it to someone else. Aderyn also hates perfection. Despite that, she forces herself to be a perfectionist because of her parents' pushing.

Aderyn has slight claustrophobia, and that makes it hard to live in Gigarte for her.

Biography: She was born and raised in Lenoila for about ten years. Once her parents scrounged up enough money, they moved underground to Gigarte to start a new life. That new life would include Aderyn going to a seemingly "perfect" boarding school, where teachers and students tried to mold her into something she was not, and never could become. She made a few friends who were like her, but her best friends were her Pokemon.

Aderyn had met Sirius and Pisces in the boarding school. The two were being bullied by some of the guys that went to her school. She managed to surprise them and helped the two Pokemon escape. They didn't trust her all that much, but after feeding and nursing them back to health, Sirius and Pisces found that they were stuck to her like glue.

When she turned eighteen and graduated from the horrid boarding school, Aderyn received Hera as her "official" starter Pokemon. She loved all three of them dearly and equally. Luckily, the three seemed to get along nicely, which had been a major concern for Aderyn. Still, after the graduation, Aderyn left Gigarte to start a Pokemon journey as wanderlust had started to seep in during the past few years.

Starting Pokemon:
Nickname: Sirius
Species: Riolu
Gender: Male
Level: 5
Nature: Naive
Ability: Inner Focus
Attacks: Quick-Attack, Foresight, Endure

Nickname: Pisces
Species: Mudkip
Gender: Male
Level: 5
Nature: Naive
Ability: Torrent
Attacks: Tackle, Growl

Nickname: Hera
Species: Charmander
Gender: Female
Level: 5
Nature: Calm
Ability: Blaze
Attacks: Scratch, Growl

Items:
Pokeballs x3
Potion x6
Antidote x3
Paralyze Heal x3

What is the biscuit's name? Bertha~
Other Notes: ~Aderyn means bird in Welsh.
~Kanti is a Native American word meaning "sings."
~Aderyn's mother is Welsh and her father is a Cherokee Native American.
~She's a hacker.

((Ryn's a new character I created and I will usually write in first person for her. Will that be a problem for the RP?))


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post Jun 4 2009, 05:43 PM
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:E


People usually write in 3rd person. It's jarring from the reader' point of view, as well as sort of annoying for the mod grading it. So...sorry, no. Everything else checks out, though.


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post Jun 5 2009, 04:04 PM
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That's fine, too. I've had more experience in 3rd person anyway. ^^ You make a good point about first person, so I'll happily stick with third. happy.gif


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post Jun 5 2009, 04:06 PM
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Okay. Approved.


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