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Broken Beyond Belief, A Fantasy RP
Wishful Jirachi
post Nov 12 2012, 07:41 PM
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Broken Beyond Belief

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When you find yourselves immersed in a world which you could never hope to understand, in a world where magic works differently and death is a high possibility, nightmares will become reality and sanity will be lost. You will come to each other's necks as you face what no other has seen and as you fight, as you suffer each chilling blow, you'll uncover the master of the realm and with their discovery, take their life. Yet, nothing in this realm or any other is the cure. We are broken beyond belief.


PLOT:
It is a known fact that there are many worlds beyond ours. Some of which run alongside ours as if within a similar time or place and some which run on a distant path, on another line. There is a world line distant from ours that like the others has no bridges between. Not even the strongest magic from our world can access these bridges which seem to only be opened from the other side by those who knowingly or unknowingly wish to use them. Not only are these bridges nearly always closed, they are particular in who may travel upon them and only once before was there a being from our world who could not only walk the bridges but call them as well.

It has been many years since this being lived, never returning after crossing the most elusive of bridges but now more have been born with the gift. They don't realize it; they are no different from any other, yet, they may cross these bridges when one is presented to them. However, not all bridges are safe to be walked upon. The most elusive of bridges in particular.

This bridge connects to a world that has no control, a world where the very realm affects the events which take place in it. This realm has no life, no structure. It is violent and twisted, often lashing out at forms of life which venture into it. It replicates the worlds around it, without seeming to have an identity of its own. Yet, there is no question of the world's existence or being. The bridge to this world is called when wanted and seeks those which the realm needs. The world feeds and so calls those who can walk the bridges to it.

Those born in Ethos, a world filled with magic and fantasy, that posses the ability to walk the bridges will find themselves called upon by the elusive bridge. Unable to deny the bridge what it seeks, they will be forced into this chaotic world and there will find a creature which seems to have no being. He holds power in the world and with the arrival of the walkers , he will attempt to contact them. He will connect with them but he will hate them all the same. His action will be violent and deadly. The walkers will find themselves fighting for their lives while the realm takes a hold on them, imbedding itself in their hearts and grasping their souls. They will find themselves slipping away while the realm slowly consumes them and even if they manage to cross again, bridges don't forget. They are persistent and in time, they will call upon their walkers again.

*The remainder of the plot will not be revealed to allow roleplayers to adapt to the twists and turns as they would naturally respond. Events are affected by the decisions that are made but all roads lead to the same conclusion. Further details will be presented as they are needed.*


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Rules:
-No Bunnying/Godmodding (He, the creature of the red realm, will godmod at times to show power. It is an intentional plot device! Do not worry though, he won't just flat out kill someone. Death's will be organized prior to their occurrence.)
-Follow GTS+ rules.
-Follow my rules.
-If you will be gone, please let us know in the OCC.
-If you read this, put derpy dino in your post.
-No calling bridges unless told to do so.
-No walking bridges unless I present it to you or tell you to.
-No one can control He but me.
-Controlling the realm in the RP at the beginning is allowed to a degree. As time passes it will become strictly my job. If you would like to have something happen, nothing positive. No creating or summoning anything. You may alter the geography but not the sky or the ruins. There is a plan to the realm and too much tampering will hinder it.
-Please respond in a decent time frame.
-Please try to use proper grammar and spelling.
-Please try to put effort into your posts. (No one-liners!)
-If there are issues, post in the OCC. Do not clutter the RP.
-Use indications for OCC, such as () or [].
-No OCC only posts in the RP. Post those in the OCC.
-If you read this, put purple pumpkins in your post.
-There will be violence and possibly romance. Rated PG13.
-Multiple characters per person are allowed but uphold to your commitments. If you find that you can't handle all of the characters you make, an agreement can be made to kill one off. If you quit the RP, your character will be killed off.
-I have the right to ask for profile and post edits.
-Don't be afraid to ask questions. I'm here to help. =)
-Have fun! =3


Profile:
-Username: (Your username)
-Character Name: (First and last)
-Species: (Vampire, Human, Elf, or Hybrd-Animal (List animal))
-Gender: (Male or Female)
-Age: (In the case of vampires and elves, appearance age/actual age. Min age 18.)
-Home Town: (Simply list it)
-Power: (List and explain both in Ethos and Red Realm. Powers in the red realm are chaotic. Read Tyre's profile for an example. NO EARTH/TERRAIN ALTERING POWERS.)
-Weapons: (List and/or explain. Certain powers allow more weapons.)
-Appearance: (Basics, be detailed. Picture only NOT allowed.)
-Personality: (Detailed!)
-History: (Not required. Simple jot list is approved.)

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[size="3"]Profile:[/size]
[size="2"]-Username:[/size] (Your username)
[size="2"]-Character Name:[/size] (First and last)
[size="2"]-Species:[/size] (Vampire, Human, Elf, or Hybrd-Animal (List animal))
[size="2"]-Gender:[/size] (Male or Female)
[size="2"]-Age:[/size] (In the case of vampires and elves, appearance age/actual age. Min age 18.)
[size="2"]-Home Town: [/size](Simply list it)
[size="2"]-Power:[/size] (List and explain both in Ethos and Red Realm. Powers in the red realm are chaotic. Read Tyre's profile for an example. NO EARTH/TERRAIN ALTERING POWERS.)
[size="2"]-Weapons: [/size](List and/or explain. Certain powers allow more weapons.)
[size="2"]-Appearance:[/size] (Basics, be detailed. Picture only NOT allowed.)
[size="2"]-Personality:[/size] (Detailed!)
[size="2"]-History:[/size] (Not required. Simple jot list is approved.)



The Appearance of He, the Creature of the Realm:
He has two appearances, that of his true appearance, and that of his physical rendition. His true appearance is similar to that of a haze or cloud. It is of a dark grey/black color and does not hang in a particular form, this is to mean that he doesn't look like a humanoid cloud figure, simply a clouded haze. In this form he has no physical features which indicate how he sees, hears or speaks, yet; he can do all three. His voice seems to emit from within him and almost within everything else.

His physical rendition is that similar to that of a vampire. He stands at six' seven'' with light grey toned skin. His ears are pointed but no wear near as long as that of some elves. His hair is slicked back and longer in length, fanning around his ears. It is white in color and youthful. His eyes are amber with slitted pupils while his facial features are elegant and almost noble. In fact, his entire appearance give off an air of nobility, upper class gentleman.

For attire, he wears a dark red, almost maroon jacket. This jacket has a high collar and a V neck, through which can be seen his exposed chest. The V cuts about mid chest, seeming both sides of the jacket together through a button system The sleeves of the jacket are long and have white cuffs at the ends, both buttoned with a black clip, while the bottom of his jacket cuts in the back almost like that of at tuxedo's jacket. While the primary color of the jacket is maroon, the buttons on the front as well as the inside of the jacket's collar and other various details are black.

Being that the jacket is the only piece of clothing which adorns his upper body, his lower body wear consists of a simple pair of long black pants with black boots. The boots are fashioned with white buckles. Therefore, his attire is that of formal wear and his attitude almost equally thus. In addition, small will-o-wisps of a faint black, red color seem to wisp from his frame, primarily his back and feet, while his forehead is framed almost like that of a crown due to the horns/spikes protruding from his head. (Two larger in the front and two smaller to the sides.)

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*This RP was created from inspiration spurred from the RP Red Skies*


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post Nov 12 2012, 07:41 PM
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Vampires:
Sybil Frederick-21/189-Female-Blood Magic/Water-Darkrow (Status: Alive/No Wounds)

Humans:
Tyre Neire-32/223-Male-Shapeshifter/Fusion-Wishful Jirachi (Status: Alive/No Wounds)
Vanessa Moser-75-Female-Metal/Crystal-Darkrow (Status: Alive/No Wounds)
Adair Kun (left)-29-Male-Mercury/Acid-Wishful Jirachi (Status: Alive/No Wounds)
Demetrius Laskaris-Male-Bone/Flesh-Darkrow (In Progress/Reserved)
Victoria Hayward-23-Female-Disillusion/Poison-SD (Status: Alive/No Wounds)


Elves:
Shadow Hume-18/18-Male-Manipulation (Mental) /Music-Shadow (Status: Alive/No Wounds)
Elaine Sein-23/201-Female-Projection/Manipulation (Physical) -Wishful Jirachi (Status: Alive/No Wounds)
Elysion Galhadhril-25/435Female-Ice/Energy-Aura (Status: Alive/No Wounds)

Hybrids:
Oni Minae-27-Female-Electricty/Plasma-Snow Leopard-Wishful Jirachi (Status: Alive/No Wounds)
Remer Datchuli-20-Male-Wind/Air-Raven-Crimson (Status: Alive/No Wounds)
Faith Averywood-20-Female-Fire Healing/Chaotic Fire-Timberwolf-SilverPuppy9 (Status: Alive/No Wounds)

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post Nov 12 2012, 08:09 PM
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post Nov 12 2012, 08:13 PM
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Yes, of course. Looking forward to it.

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post Nov 12 2012, 08:40 PM
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-Character Name: Shadow Hume
-Species: Elf
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-Age: Appearance Age: 18 Actual Age: 18
-Home Town: Geld
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Shadow uses his sword for most of his magic, and it is the focus of his entire plan. He uses it for various things, but his specialty is setting it on fire. He can used his sword as a sort of batan as well and control animals with it. He learned this in the forest he grew up in, he loves these powers and cherishes them. Side effects of overuse include the lost use of his right arm and being unable to walk.

Shadow in the Red Realm uses his sword as a conductors Baton as well, but more powerful. Shadow uses this to control a sweet symphony of music, which can bring out different emotions in people or animals, such as when he plays a quickly tempo'd song it will cause pain to shoot through his target, and a slow tempo'd song may cause the loss of the will to fight. He cannot use this on humanoids yet because he has barely mastered the skill, but he enjoys it anyway since he has always loved music. Side effects from over use incluse the lost use of his right arm and a massive headache.

-Weapons: He uses a small rapier which he keeps in a small leather sheath on his waist.
-Appearance: A rather short elf, he stands 5' 4", and tries his best to seem taller. He wears a simple tunic that is a dull red color and loves to go bare-footed. His hair is red as well but is striking as a bright color, his eyes match, but in the opposite way, being a very deep red with small emerald rings. His hair stands a half inch off of his head and he doesn't like it too long, unlike most elves. His arms are slightly muscled due to the use of his sword, but his left arm is barely used at all. His feet are well callused from running bare-foot and his legs are well muscled from long hours of training. He loves to run and does so often, building up his legs even more. He trains with his sword often as well, building his right arm up, even though his left arm is lacking immensely to keep up.
-Personality: He likes to hide his emotions as best he can, he is tired of people ridiculing him for his silly thoughts and actions sometimes so keeps to himself as best he can. He has little to no friends exept for his mentor and himself. When he does open up to people he is fun-loving and is kind. He loves having company even though he doesn't show it. He loves nature and spends time there often, he feels that it calms him and helps him to relieve stress. The forest is like a second home to him and he crerishes any time that he spends there, with his busy schedule it is generally short breaks when he can escape. He uses this time to connect with nature, and when disturbed is very easily angered. Anyone disturbing him had better have a good reason or they may have to run for their lives.
-History: He used to live in the forest, trained by his mentor and then moved to Geld to try and help others with his abilities.

I wanna derpy dino! I would feed him Purple Pumpkins!!!!!!!!

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-Character Name: Aurelia Wolfe
-Species: Vampire
-Gender: Female
-Age: appears 21, actually 125
-Home Town: Adema
-Power: Aurelia's main power interest is fire. She can manipulate it to be what ever. She only ever uses this during big fights. But when she does, she does not take the fighting lightly. She can create the fire, and control what it consumes. But if her mind is not set in the right direction, it may get ugly real soon.
In the Red Realm, her control over fire weakens. She can still use it, but it is a lot harder for her to tell it where to go and what to consume. When she uses it here, she often loses control easier. Aurelia also has a hard time getting out o her fire rage state.
-Weapons: Broadsword, which she carries upon her back. The hilt is black. Her stepmomma's brother gave it to her and showed her how to use it without looking weak and awkward. She can use it with ease and without struggling what so ever.
Poisoned knives which every female in her family had been taught to use at a young age. Her momma had taught her to use this before she passed away. These are in black leather sheaths in her boots, on her waist and in her shirt sleeves.
-Appearance: Aurelia She has red eyes, and black hair. Aurelia stands at 5' 3''. She wears a black shirt and black bagy jeans. He shirt is bare at her shoulders, and comes to the middle of her stomach. He jeans are long, and cover her legs all to her ankles. She wears high heeled black, buckled boots. These give her a 2 inch height. Her hair falls just below her shoulders. She always keeps this down. In her pockets when she is not wearing them, she has dark sunglasses, which she wears to hide her red eyes. On her neck, you can barely see the bite marks where she was bitten at. The skin is slightly lighter than the rest of her pale body.
-Personality: Aurelia is often quiet. She does not speak her mind, and doesn't talk about her feelings. When she was little, her pappa had beat her for speaking her mind on him marrying someone else when her momma was murdered. After that, since she had never been beaten before, she had kept her mouth shut, afraid to talk for fear of being beaten again. She wants nothing but blood. She has not yet fully controlled her instincts. When she can, she saves her prey from dying inorder to drink from them. Also, she likes the strength it gives her. Although, deep in side, she wants someone to hold her. Tell her they can be there and take care of her. But she won't ever tell you that. Don't make her mad, she has a temper that, once released, it is hard to destroy. In order to make her mad, the best way is tell her she is nothing and is a cold hearted being. That she is hated and won't ever be like the humans. Aurelia also tends to follow others, rather than make up her mind on her own.
-History: Aurelia was once a sweet girl. She had her stepmomma and pappa to take care of her. But one day, she waited for her pappa to get home from home. Someone had come and was talking to stepmomma. Than, she heard silence. Walking around, Aurelia had searched hard for her stepmomma, and panicked. She ran out the back door, and was attacked. She felt a sharp pain, every where. than in her neck. And everything went black. She awoken, to find blood on the ground, but no one was anywhere to found.

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post Nov 12 2012, 09:28 PM
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The Sybil mentioned in Tyre's profile is meeeee, she should be up soonish.

Might have a Human as well.


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post Nov 12 2012, 09:43 PM
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@2Gamers: thrust.gif I'm overjoyed to see that "Seel" of Approval. Thank you and I hope you enjoy. =)

@Shadow and Angel: I'd like to firstly thank you for showing interest. Secondly, I do not mean anything hurtful by this, but there are some issues that would need to be resolved if the profiles were to be accepted. This RP will take dedication and so the profiles need to be given the same amount of dedication as expected in posts and quite frankly, for the time being, the profiles could be better.

@Shadow:
-Age: Elves do not appear to stop aging, in most references, until they are in their late twenties, thirties or so. Therefore, your character will not appear to be ten when they are sixteen. They would in fact appear to be sixteen. While sixteen is an alright age, an older age would fit the RP better.
-Power: It's quite frankly a little cliche. By that I mean to have your characters name be the same as their power and to an extent the power itself. The powers in Ethos are yes, meant to be generic, but the powers in the red realm are meant to be chaotic, disordered. If you could take a thought to altering it, I'd appreciate that.
-Weapon, Appearance, Personality: They just aren't detailed enough. I don't feel like I know your character at all. Why not explain how they fight? How they would react in certain situations? What kind of haircut does he have? Does he have any scars? Any birth marks? Something. I'm already letting you get away without a history. A personality is required.

@Angel:
-Age: Her appearance should not be 13, but older. You also neglected to include her actual age. Note that a vampires appearance is not the age at which they were turned into a vampire.
-Power: Please expand. I also would like the red realm ability to be somehow related to the ethos ability as it means that the red realm twists them. Having a completely different ability does not portray this.
-Weapons, Appearance, Personality: More detail please. What types of weapons, specifically? Why does she know how to use so many different kinds? 'some type of red gown' is very vague. Where does it cut? What length is her hair? Does she have a scar on her neck from where she was bitten? Why is she silent? Is the reason she simply wants blood because she hasn't mastered controlling her vampire instincts? What makes her mad?


Edit: For those using the profile sheet, I added a min age. Please note this.

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post Nov 12 2012, 09:54 PM
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Edited, sorry for the small confusions but I think it should be good now, tell me if I missed anything else, I sometimes enjoy the critisism.


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post Nov 12 2012, 10:04 PM
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I know I'm not Wishie (I did help her with this, though cat.gif ), but I think something good for everyone would be to read Wishie's example profile; it's quite long, yes, but it should give you all a good idea of what she's looking for in a profile. It doesn't have to be that long, however.

Also, Wishie, Sybil has that wonderful blood magic, if you'd please add that when you put her in the reserved list. happy.gif


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Thank you Dark. Always so helpful. =)

@Shadow: Please re-read a few things and do as Dark suggested. Gratz on noticing something too. wink.gif

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post Nov 12 2012, 10:14 PM
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My pleasure, feel free to ask me questions, I'm... the pseudo-co-owner of this, I guess. Often in direct contact with Wishie as well.

Also Wishie, please add Vanessa Moser in the reserved list in the Human section. Haven't decided the magic yet.


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You know the full plot, Dark. You might as well be co-owner. lol
And yes, for those who don't know, Dark and I are often in direct contact so we'll easily be able to coordinate. =)

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post Nov 12 2012, 10:24 PM
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I fixed the age if that was the problem... Also thanks proudbow.gif


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The appearance is a bit bare-bones for my tastes... but I'd accept it, personally.

In my opinion, maybe a bit more info in appearance would be good, as well as some more in the personality department; you could get the structure in the example profile, it would greatly help. I'd say perhaps at least a juicy paragraph for it? Ultimately, it's in Wishie's hands, just the way I see it~


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@Shadow: Dark has the correct idea. I'm sad to say that your realm power cannot be terrain altering. Fix this as well and you should be all good.


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I'll fix it in the morning... Right now I am suppost to be asleep... Shhhh


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